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Late for work but still the coolest guy in the world I am rather sure that everyone must have had the experiences of being late for work, whether because of oversleeping, missing the bus or unexpected events. consequently, being late is probably an annoying situation which is whoever can be found in daily life, excepting this man. Amadei Weiland, who turned crisis into opportunity by did the parkour run through Hamburg, Germany to get to work in time, posted a video of doing a parkour run for 3 years ago on his youtube channel. This incredible video shows his stunt of doing the daredevil things such as run across rooftops to rooftops, jumping out of the bedroom window, and climbing the building with barely hands. The fluidity of his movements was breathtaking and really made me satisfied. At the same time, it was humorous that the name of his clip video was “late for work” but he still show the talent with everything in front of him, no matter it was necessary or not. For instead, he did a flip with a wall in front of his office. Anyway, I got a lot of encouragement after finished his video — even though how the world getting worse, if I am still cool and hot, it is enough.
Late
for
work
but
still
the coolest guy in the world

I am
rather
sure that everyone
must
have had the experiences of being
late
for
work
, whether
because
of oversleeping, missing the bus or unexpected
events
.
consequently
, being
late
is
probably
an annoying situation which is whoever can
be found
in daily life, excepting this
man
.

Amadei
Weiland
, who turned crisis into opportunity by did the parkour run through Hamburg, Germany to
get
to
work
in time, posted a
video
of doing a parkour run for 3 years ago on his
youtube
channel. This incredible
video
shows
his stunt of doing the daredevil things such as run across rooftops to rooftops, jumping out of the bedroom window, and climbing the building with
barely
hands.

The fluidity of his movements was breathtaking and
really
made me satisfied. At the same time, it was humorous that the name of his clip
video
was
“late
for
work”
but
he
still
show
the talent with everything in front of him, no matter it was necessary or not. For
instead
, he did a flip with a wall in front of his office.

Anyway, I
got
a lot of
encouragement after finished his
video
even though
how the world getting worse, if I am
still
cool and hot, it is
enough
.
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IELTS academic writhing a newspaper article about an extreme sport

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  American English
5 paragraphs
217 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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