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The graph demonstrates the differences in people's activities performed on phones while watching TV programs. It can be deduced that the vast majority of individuals start to use the device when advertisements begin are played, the number of such cases reaches about 58%. According to the illustration half of the pie chart is occupied by three sections, which vary within 30%. 37% of actions were committed by people to verify the data that was said on television. The next two fractions have a slightly below the percentage of around 32-35% consist of actions such as going to websites listed on programs or corresponding with those who are also streaming. In addition, activities like watching what others suggest are the same percentage, about 20%, as sharing opinions about watching on the internet. In marked contrast, the section with the lowest quantity of what people do when streaming programs, which is only half of the previous parts, is voting for a live-action show.
The graph demonstrates the differences in
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the device when advertisements
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, the number of such cases reaches about 58%.

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by three sections, which vary within 30%. 37% of actions
were committed
by
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people
to verify the data that
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on television. The
next
two fractions have a
slightly
below the percentage of around 32-35% consist of actions such as going to websites listed on programs or corresponding with those who are
also
streaming.
In addition
, activities like watching what others suggest are the same percentage, about 20%, as sharing opinions about watching on the internet.

In marked contrast, the section with the lowest quantity of what
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do when streaming programs, which is
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.
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IELTS academic reasons for using phones to access television

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161 words
7.0
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