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Chart representing areas of field used for plantation of grains in Canada

Chart representing areas of field used for plantation of grains in Canada Yw7Kj
The chart represents the number of area which was used for cultivating grains between the year 1990 and 2020 in a particular state in Canada. The areas on which grains were grown were Red Field, Sunny Valley, Spring Plains and Others. It can be shown that Red Field was mostly used for the plantation of grains in Canada between the year 1990 and 2010, with a mean acres used being 60 compared to other fields, especially Others. Moreover, when compared to the year 1990, amount of land used for growing grains was reduced in the year 2010 and this can be illustrated by the depicted statistics. For example, amount of field used in Sunny Valley decreased from approximately 10 acres in the year 2010, when compared to that of the year 1990. Lastly, it can be also be noted that the most amount of acres in Sunny Valley used were in the year 2000. Thus, it can be concluded that the year largest amount of acres used for cultivation was in the 19920 and the largest plantation took place in Red Field.
The chart represents the number of area which was
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used
for cultivating
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grains
between the
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year
1990 and 2020 in a particular state in Canada. The areas on which
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grains
were grown
were Red
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Field
, Sunny Valley, Spring Plains
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and Others
.

It can
be shown
that Red
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Field
was
mostly
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used
for the plantation of
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grains
in Canada between the
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year
1990 and 2010, with a mean
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acres
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used
being 60 compared to other
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fields
,
especially
Others.

Moreover
, when compared to the
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year
1990,
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amount
of land
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used
for growing
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grains
was
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reduced
in the
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year
2010 and this can
be illustrated
by the depicted statistics.
For example
,
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amount
of
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field
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used
in Sunny Valley decreased from approximately 10
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acres
in the
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year
2010, when compared to that of the
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year
1990.

Lastly
, it can be
also
be noted
that the most
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amount
of
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acres
in Sunny Valley
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used
were in the
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year
2000.

Thus
, it can
be concluded
that the
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year
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largest
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amount
of
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acres
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used
for cultivation was in the 19920 and the largest plantation took place in Red
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Field
.
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