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The two maps illustrate two road tunnels that take place in two Australian cities.

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The two maps illustrate two road tunnels that take place in two Australian cities. It is clear that there were many differences between tunnel 1 and tunnel 2 in terms of construction costs, time, height, length, structure, and vehicle capacity. As far as the first differences, tunnel 1 had costly with 555 million dollars meanwhile tunnel 2 was twofold as high as the figure for tunnel 1 at 1, 1 billion dollars. It is about time for building, tunnel 1 was constructed from 1986 to 1998 that took about 12 years to build, however, tunnel 2 just occurred 4 years to put up from 2002 to 2006. The height was 1, 5 meters in tunnel 1 while tunnel 2 was 2, 5 meters. In addition, The length of tunnel 2 was 3, 6 kilometers longer than tunnel 1 was 2, 2 kilometers. According to the structuration and vehicle capacity, tunnel 1 was built from 1 material source, that material source was sand meanwhile Materials for stronger cóntruction in tunnel 2 that was produced from stone and clay. Besides, the vehicle capacity in tunnel 2 was 6 lines more than in tunnel 1 was 4 lines.
The two maps illustrate two road
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that take place in two Australian cities.

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differences between
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tunnel
1 and
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tunnel
2 in terms of construction costs, time, height, length, structure, and vehicle capacity.

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first
differences,
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tunnel
1 had costly with 555 million dollars meanwhile
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tunnel
2 was twofold as high as the figure for
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tunnel
1 at 1, 1 billion dollars. It is about time for building,
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tunnel
1
was constructed
from 1986 to 1998 that took about 12 years to build,
however
,
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tunnel
2
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occurred 4 years to put up from 2002 to 2006. The height was 1, 5 meters in
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tunnel
1 while
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tunnel
2 was 2, 5 meters.
In addition
, The length of
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tunnel
2 was 3, 6 kilometers longer than
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tunnel
1 was 2, 2 kilometers.

According to the structuration and vehicle capacity,
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tunnel
1
was built
from 1 material source, that material source was sand meanwhile Materials for stronger
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cóntruction
in
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2 that
was produced
from stone and clay.
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, the vehicle capacity in
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tunnel
2 was 6 lines more than in
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1 was 4 lines.
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IELTS academic The two maps illustrate two road tunnels that take place in two Australian cities.

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