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Write sentences to give direction from your house to your university.

Write sentences to give direction from your house to your university. Pkg9d

Because my home is far from my university. It is about 12 km. And I have to go to school early. I usually leave the house at half past six. Here's how to go to school every day. I go straight on the road, turn right at the junction, keep going straight for about 5 minutes, then turn right at the intersection and continue straight for about 5m. And in the end, I just had to cross to get to the school gate.

“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 my home is far from my university. It is about 12 km. And I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 go to school early. I usually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 at half past six. Here's how to go to school every day. I go straight on the road, turn right at the junction, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 going straight for about 5 minutes, then turn right at the intersection and continue straight for about Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "5 m"5 m
5m
. And in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 had to cross to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to the school gate. 

IELTS academic Write sentences to give direction from your house to your university.

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

83 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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