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Most people say that childhood and school years are the best years in their lives why do you think people say that? Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion?

Most people say that childhood and school years are the best years in their lives why do you think people say that? Give your opinion? EqlJx
No one can deny, childhood and school years lives are the best moments of our lives. I agree with this notion due to stress free life in our childhood and in school we fun with school friends and develop our personality. I believe that in our childhood live our so easy and stressful because in that time nobody have a rat race like in younger age, everyone has to win that race, few people for their studies, but in childhood there is no race, no stress, no need of money. The thing only we need in our childhood is learning. Moreover, we also feel so amazing when elders gives us small gifts or treat. On other hand, we spend our most precise time and spend our half life in the school it is true that school life is the best era of everyone life because, in school we learn to how to live your lives, how to talk, how to behave and how to follow rules. Whereas, we gain our knowledge and personality in school friends, the moments we make with our friends in school, participating in different type activities, sports and competition. Additionally, the era of childhood and school years are best years. In my opinion children should live their in these time very openly because that times never come back, they learn many thing in that time. After school time the life of the children fully changed they become elder and no one treat them like child, have lot of pressure in mind of career, family and many more. Overall, it is hard to say that the life in childhood and school is not the best part of our live, everyone miss their school lives, the stress free life.
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friends and develop our personality.

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. Whereas, we gain our knowledge and personality in
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friends, the moments we
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with our friends in
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, participating in
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IELTS academic Most people say that childhood and school years are the best years in their lives why do you think people say that? Give your opinion?

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