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The chart below shows the fertility rate depending on the education in different countries.

The chart below shows the fertility rate depending on the education in different countries. 70JwA
The bar chart illustrates the fertility rate depending on the education level in Ethiopia, Kenya, Nigeria, Pakistan, Egypt, Indonesia and Maldives in different times. Overall, there is a clear tendecy to decrease in fertility rate by the education level' increasing. For instance, among the education levels' fertility rates, the highest rate belonged to no education, while the lowest rate belonged to Secondary or higher. It is clear that the most fertility rate for all the education levels in total was in Nigeria in 2013 (approximately 7. 0, 6. 0, and 4. 0 respectively and in total 17. 0). Meanwhile, the least fertility rate for all the education levels in sum were in Indonesia in 2012 and Maldives in 2009 (nearly for all levels 3. 0 and in total over 9. 0). It is obivous that among the levels, the most difference was in Ethiopia in 2011, because for no education the rate number was roughly 6. 0, while for the Secondary or higher the number was nearly 1. 5. On the other hand, the least difference was in Maldives in 2009 with nearly zero, so figures were almost same.
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in Ethiopia, Kenya, Nigeria, Pakistan, Egypt, Indonesia and Maldives in
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, the highest
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belonged to no
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, while the lowest
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belonged to Secondary or higher.

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in total was in Nigeria in 2013 (approximately 7. 0, 6. 0, and 4. 0
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in sum were in Indonesia in 2012 and Maldives in 2009 (
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3. 0 and in total over 9. 0).

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number was roughly 6. 0, while for the Secondary or higher the number was
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