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Describe a diagram below shows the rainwater is reused

Describe a diagram below shows the rainwater is reused wMnbn
The diagram represents the process of recycling water for different purposes. Overall,   it can be clearly seen that the water are passed by various places in the given diagram. To begin with,   rainwater are collected in the dam which are located in between two montinous. then, it is passed to the water treatment plant which filter the water for drinking. afterthat, a rainfall on the house which are stored rain water in a tank. in the next step, domestic wastewater which moved to the waste water treatment plant. Those water are not useful so they removed in the lake. on the other hand, those water which recycled the water again for useful things. Then again forward to the homes. in the last stage, the strom water passed with the help of pipes in the lake.
The diagram represents the process of recycling
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water
for
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different
purposes.

Overall
,
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it can be
clearly
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seen
that the
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water
are passed
by various places in the
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given
diagram.

To
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begin
with,
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rainwater
are collected
in the dam which
are located
in between two
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montinous
.
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then
, it
is passed
to the
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water
treatment plant which filter the
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water
for drinking.
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afterthat
, a rainfall on the
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house
which
are stored
rain
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water
in a tank.
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in
the
next
step, domestic wastewater which
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moved
to the waste
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water
treatment plant.

Those
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water
are not useful
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so
they removed in the lake.
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on
the other hand, those
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water
which recycled the
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water
again for useful things. Then again forward to the homes.
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in
the last stage, the
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strom
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water
passed with the
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help
of pipes in the lake.

IELTS academic Describe a diagram below shows the rainwater is reused

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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