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Write an essay comparing the charts from 1996 to 2002.

Write an essay comparing the charts from 1996 to 2002. 2lP6J

The bar chart presents the number of students by year and region over the years between 1996 and 2002. The vertical axis gives the number of international students while the horizontal axis shows change by year and region respectively. There was a dramatic increase from nearly 170, 000 in 1996 to 250, 000 in 2002. On the right-hand side of chart shows that the number of students from China had had a ten-fold growth from approximately 3, 000 to just above 30, 000 between 1996 and 2002 and students from India have been significantly rose either from nearly 2, 000 to just under 10, 000. On the other hand, the figure which bucks this trend is in students from Malaysia, which halved from at roughly 17, 000 to 8, 500 over the same period. Overall we can say that the number of international students dramatically increased between 1996 and 2002, particularly Chinese students skyrocketed over 6 years.

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