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The table shows commuting statistics in a European city in 1960,2010 and 2020.

The table shows commuting statistics in a European city in 1960, 2010 and 2020. BaWgV
The below table and pie chart show that in a European town mode of transportation in the 1960, 2010 and 2020. In 1960 four km distance cover in 18 minutes as compared to a 20 kilometre cover in 45 minutes in 2010. There had a very large proportion of male commuters more worked in beyond. In 2010 there was a decrease at 58 percentage as well 13% of female commuters work slighter compared to males but there was rise at almost fourth in 2010. People were not using more transportation in 1960 and they more prefer to foot. In addition, 18% and 12℅ of species use the bus and train to go for work. A tiny frequency was used other transport forecast and 10℅ of people use their car. However, it's compared to the 2010 year people prefer more use of their car and slighter going to foot. As well as the bus transportation reduces at 13℅ and train go up at 15℅. there are some others transportation a climb 2℅ more us. The over statistics show that how people use transportation in 1960, 2010 and 2020.
The below table and pie chart
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that in a European town mode of
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in the 1960, 2010 and 2020.

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cover in 45 minutes in 2010. There had a
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large proportion of male commuters more worked in beyond. In 2010 there was a decrease at 58 percentage
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there was rise at almost fourth in 2010.

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the bus and train
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other transport forecast and 10℅ of
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people
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their car.
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2010 year
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of their car and slighter going to foot.
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at 13℅ and train go up at 15℅.
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others
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a climb 2℅ more us.

The over statistics
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in 1960, 2010 and 2020.
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