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Write an article for the newspaper, giving examples of polite behaviour in social situations and your views on the importance of good manners.

Write an article for the newspaper, giving examples of polite behaviour in social situations and your views on the importance of good manners. Ar8rN
Nowadays, people pay more attention about polite behaviours because they know the importance of good manners. There are a lot of unwritten rules in our daily life. For example, When we are invited to someone's house, we should give a small present for owners to show that we appriciate them. Besides, it is necessary that we take off our shoes before entering their house. Additionally, I am sure that in the early childhood, we were taught that we should not shout or yell at the public places such as on the bus, on the train or at the station. This is true becaue we may bother people around us, and sometimes it can be rude. As an Asian people, we must remember that we have to invite the elderly eating first in the meal, and then we start enjoying the meal. It is usually called a table manner. The reason why we must do this is that arcording to the Asian's tradition, the young must show respect to the elderly in any situation. Besides, People now try to learn how to be polite as they realize the importance of good manners. In morden society, if we make a curtersy action, we can make an impression to other people. We easily to make friends and expand our relationship. As result, we not only develop our careers and open the door proficienally. Being polite can help us address the tough problem easily. For instance, If we have an accident, We should use polite word and reaction. The reason is that some studies show that if we are talking with a angry person, we should stay calm because it is the best way to hep her regain his self-possession. To sum up, We should be polite in any social situation since its advantages outweigh the other site. Additinally, it plays an important role in our life.
Nowadays,
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people
pay more attention about
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polite
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behaviours
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because
they know the importance of
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good
manners. There are
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a lot of
unwritten
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rules
in our daily life.
For example
, When we
are invited
to someone's
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house
, we should give a
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small
present for owners to
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show
that we
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appriciate
them.
Besides
, it is necessary that we take off our shoes
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before
entering their
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house
.
Additionally
, I am sure that in the early childhood, we
were taught
that we should not shout or yell at the public places such as on the bus, on the train or at the station. This is true
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becaue
we may bother
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people
around us, and
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sometimes
it can be rude. As an Asian
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people
, we
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must
remember that we
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have to
invite the elderly eating
first
in the meal, and then we
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start
enjoying the meal. It is
usually
called a table manner. The reason why we
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must
do this is that
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arcording
to the Asian's tradition, the young
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
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show
respect to the elderly in any situation.
Besides
,
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People
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now
try to learn how to be
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polite
as they realize the importance of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
manners. In
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morden
society, if we
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make
a
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curtersy
action, we can
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make
an impression to other
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people
. We
easily
to
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make
friends and expand our relationship. As result, we not
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only
develop our careers and open the door
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proficienally
. Being
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polite
can
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help
us address the tough problem
easily
.
For instance
, If we have an accident, We should
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use
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polite
word and reaction. The reason is that
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some
studies
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show
that if we are talking with
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a
angry person, we should stay calm
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because
it is the best way to
Did you mean "help" or "hip" ("hep" is old-fashioned for "hip")?
hep
her regain his self-possession. To sum up, We should be
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polite
in any social situation since its advantages outweigh the other site.
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Additinally
, it plays an
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important
role in our life.
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IELTS academic Write an article for the newspaper, giving examples of polite behaviour in social situations and your views on the importance of good manners.

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313 words
5.5
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