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The line chart shows the propotion of citizens in the city of fordburg who were obese from 1990 to 2010 a predicyion for the future

The line chart shows the propotion of citizens in the city of fordburg who were obese from 1990 to 2010 a predicyion for the future 8GB0l
The line chart illustrates the number of citizens in fordburg city who were obese from 1990 to 2101 a forecast for the future. Overall, the percentage of obese men, women, children gradually increased from 1990 to 2010, and it is anticipated to grow in the future except for children. Children are predicted to reduce obesity in 2030, 2035. Regarding men, there was a gradual rise in the past. The percentage of obese men is predicted to continue to grow and reach a high peak at 50 percent in 2035. As can be seen in the chart, the women's percentage stood at 17% in 1990, which was the highest among the three. It also gradually went up before witnessing the rapid rise in 2030 42% and in 2035: 44% In contrast, the percentage of children's obesity is forecasted to drop at 14% in 2030 and 10% in 2035 after rising from 1990 to 2025.
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city who were obese from 1990 to 2101 a forecast for the future.
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, the
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obesity in 2030, 2035. Regarding
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men
, there was a gradual rise in the past. The
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of obese
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men
is predicted
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stood at 17% in 1990, which was the highest among the three. It
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witnessing the rapid rise in 2030 42% and in 2035: 44%

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IELTS academic The line chart shows the propotion of citizens in the city of fordburg who were obese from 1990 to 2010 a predicyion for the future

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