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Use of internet by American women

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The chart show proportion of US female population who use the internet, which grouped into different age-range, on year 2000 and 2001. There has been an infinitesimal rise in proportion of two different years. Furthermore, the more old of age-group, the less percentages. At the end of the century, averagely 85 per cent of youth to young adult, from 12 to 24 years old, access the internet. While on year 2001, there is a surge ofratio in 16- to 18-year-olds girls who surfing on a network. It's make approximate percentage in these age group might reach 90 per cent. In the adults of 36-45-years-old about 7 of 10 get on the network in year 2000. On the contrary, when the new century has come, percentage of them punch beyond three-quarters. At two last group, during first period of survey, just above two-fifths and a fifths of them had used internet, respectively. However, in the second term, internet user among 56- to 65-year-olds female punch through 50 per cent. Finally, in the eldest group, at the beginning of new century, one of ten had new experience with internet. In summary, ratio of internet user is slightly higher in the latter part of survey.

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