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Write about disasters that you have seen

Write about disasters that you have seen N8BwN

The worst disaster I have ever known As we know, natural disasters are harmful and dangerous for everyone such as earthquakes, wildfires, tsunamis and tonardoes. They lead to the consequences for the environment, loss of human life and damage to property. The most worst natural disaster in VN is flood. A flood is an overflow of water that submerges land that is usually dry. Big or small, it can have effects on your home and your family. Last October, my country - Vietnam has the most severe floods in decades in central cities and provinces. More than 100 people are dead and thousands of homes have been submerged. More than 7, 200 hectares of food crops have been sumerged and damaged, and more than 691, 000 cattle and poultry have been killed or swept away in flood water. Sixteen national highways and 161, 880 meters of local roads in four provinces have also been damaged. So that, many kind people and organisations help and donate essential things to those unlucky families. In our school, we donate books, coats, socks and boots to the children. In conclusion, natural disasters in general and floods in particular causes serious damage. In my opinion, the solution is saving our enviroment such as plant more trees, reuse and reduce our products or reduce our use of plastic

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disaster
 I have ever known

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disasters
 are harmful and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 for everyone such as earthquakes, wildfires, tsunamis and Possible spelling mistake found.tornadoes
tonardoes
. They lead to the consequences for the environment, loss of human life and damage to property. The Use only "worst" (without 'most') when you use the superlative.worst
most worst
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disaster
 in VN is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdelugedownpourglutflowspatesurge
flood
. A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdelugedownpourglutflowspatesurge
flood
 is an overflow of water that submerges land that is
usually
 dry. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
Big
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small
, it can have effects on your home and your family. Last October, my country Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 Vietnam has the most severe You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdelugedownpourglutflowspatesurge
floods
 in decades in central cities and provinces. More than 100 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are dead and thousands of homes have been submerged
. More than 7, 200 hectares of food crops have been Possible spelling mistake found.submerged
sumerged
 and damaged, and more than 691, 000 cattle and poultry have been killed
 or swept away in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdelugedownpourglutflowspatesurge
flood
 water. Sixteen national highways and 161, 880 meters of local roads in four provinces have also
been damaged
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
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many
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people
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organisations
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 and donate essential things to those unlucky families. In our school, we donate books, coats, socks and boots to the children. In conclusion
, natural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withharmcrashcatastropheemergencyfailurefiasco
disasters
in general
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdelugedownpourglutflowspatesurge
floods
in particular
 causes serious damage. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
 my opinion, the solution is saving our Possible spelling mistake found.environment
enviroment
 such as plant more trees, reuse and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
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reduce
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use
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