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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea purchases in 5 different Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea purchases in 5 different Australian cities. WEQ9N
The bar chart compares the interests of residents regarding their consumption of coffee and tea in five popular cities of Australia. Overall, it is apparent from the graph that the majority of the population prefer to have coffee or tea by visiting a cafe in all the cities with an exception in Adelaide. On the other hand, over the last 4 weeks buying fresh coffee is the modest option. To explain in detail, in Sydney the purchase of fresh and instant coffee accounted for around 43 and 45 percent respectively which are significantly low when compared to the percentage of people drinking them in a cafe. Melbourne and Hobart cities also account for similar proportions in the purchase of coffee and tea. Brisbane and Adelaide are the cities where very few populations prefer to buy fresh coffee in comparison to other cities. Adelaide is the only city where the percentage consumption of instant coffee outweighs the proportion of having them in a cafe.
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of Australia.

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coffee
or tea by visiting a
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cafe
in all the
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cities
with an exception in Adelaide.
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, over the last 4 weeks buying fresh
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coffee
is the modest option.

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in detail, in Sydney the
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purchase
of fresh and instant
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coffee
accounted for around 43 and 45 percent
respectively
which are
significantly
low when compared to the percentage of
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people
drinking them in a
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cafe
. Melbourne and Hobart
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also
account for similar proportions in the
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of
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and tea.

Brisbane and Adelaide are the
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where
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few populations prefer to
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fresh
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in comparison
to other
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. Adelaide is the
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city where the percentage consumption of instant
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coffee
outweighs the proportion of having them in a
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cafe
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea purchases in 5 different Australian cities.

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