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Venus heard rumor that Psyche was more beautiful than her and asked her son, Cupid, to make Psyche fall in love with the ugliest monster. He instead caused himself to love her. He visited Psyche every night but forbidden to look at his face. Her curiosity made Cupid be betrayed and disappear. Psyche looked for him but eventually stumbled across his mother. The goddess offered Psyche to travel underworld to fulfill beauty box. On the way back, she peeked inside box and sleep deeply. Meanwhile, Cupid escaped and saved her from danger. Finally, they were marriage and lived together happily
Venus heard rumor that
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was more
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than her and asked her son, Cupid, to
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make
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Psyche
fall in
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with the ugliest monster. He
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her. He visited
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every night
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forbidden to look at his face. Her curiosity made Cupid
be betrayed
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Psyche
looked for him
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eventually
stumbled across his mother. The goddess offered
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Psyche
to travel underworld to fulfill beauty box. On the way back, she peeked inside box and sleep
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. Meanwhile, Cupid escaped and saved her from
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danger
.
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