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The line graph above shows the number of books borrowed from four village libraries from June to September. The pie chart shows the types of books.

The line graph above shows the number of books borrowed from four village libraries from June to September. The pie chart shows the types of books. eAVqG
The line graph illustrates the amount of books borrowed from four different village libraries between june and september, the pie chart provides a breakdown of five types of books borrowed. Overall, the number of books borrowed in Fiction village experienced a downward trend from june an september, while West Eaton increased with some fluctuation. Fiction kind of books was by far the most popular in the given period. According to the first graph, the amount of books borrowed in Ryeslip village was by far the most, at 300 by june, and after 4 months this decreased by approximately 125. Church Mount and West Eaton villages were the same amount of books borrowed in june(50) and in september (150). In Sutton Wood village the number of books which borrowed made up 300 in september. Looking at the pie chart, the proportion of history and science types were the same, at 14%. The percentage of fiction and biography types ranked as first and second, with 43% and 19% respectively. Only one in ten percent of self-help type was borrowed in the time period.
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