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what is this talk about it please

what is this talk about it please al3pY
The diagram gives information about how the newspaper is printed in a process call lithography. Overall, the process started with row paper and finished with printed newspaper all in 6-step. first stages one, two and three work together. level 1is the plate cylinder which has the design of pictures that are used in the process. in level 2 water roller determine those parts shouldn't be printed and in stage 3 oil-based ink is inserted on the paper. In the next level which is 4 and 5( blanket cylinder and impression cylinder respectively )work together and fix the picture on the paper, while the blanket cylinder put the design on pages the impressive cylinder above of it try to press it. in the last stage (6) the tow dryers hot and cold helped the process going well and dry newspaper ink. end of the process the newspaper is ready to be a Believer.
The diagram gives information about how the
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newspaper
is printed
in a
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process
call lithography.
Overall
, the
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process
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started
with row paper and finished with printed
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newspaper
all in 6-step.
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first
stages one, two and three work together.
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level
1is the plate
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cylinder
which has the design of pictures that are
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used
in the
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process
.
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in
level 2 water roller determine those parts shouldn't
be printed
and in stage 3 oil-based ink
is inserted
on the paper. In the
next
level which is 4 and 5
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(
blanket
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cylinder
and impression
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cylinder
respectively
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)
work together and
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fix
the picture on the paper, while the blanket
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cylinder
put the design on pages the impressive
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cylinder
above of it try to press it. in the last stage (6) the tow dryers hot and
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cold
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helped
the
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process
going well and dry
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newspaper
ink.
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end
of the
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process
the
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newspaper
is ready to be a Believer.
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IELTS academic what is this talk about it please

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152 words
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