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The bar Chart illustrates the rate of using telephone in the United Kingdom in during seven years.

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The bar Chart illustrates the rate of using telephone in the United Kingdom in during seven years. Overall, the number of local calls have reached to 90 minutes (in billions) in 1999 and then decreased to its first rate. the other type of call usages such as national and international calls always have upward trends. At first, Maximum consume rate of local calls is 90 minutes in 1999, which in comparison with the rates of national and international calls, the trend of local calls has fluctuated and the other one was normally growing up. Although, the rate of local calls has been decreased between 1999 to 2002, these rates always are more than the maximum rates in all type of categories. Moreover, the mobile calls have two steps, which the first step of it has normally increased between 1995 to 1999 and then has significantly up warded (1999-2002). as a result, however, the rates of mobile usages sharply have progressed, but it couldn't reach to other types of calls.
The bar Chart illustrates the
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of using telephone in the United Kingdom in during seven years.

Overall
, the number of
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local
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calls
have reached to 90 minutes (in billions) in 1999 and then decreased to its
first
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rate
.
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the
other type of
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call
usages such as national and international
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calls
always have upward trends.

At
first
, Maximum consume
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rate
of
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local
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calls
is 90 minutes in 1999, which
in comparison
with the
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rates
of national and international
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calls
, the trend of
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local
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calls
has fluctuated and the other one was
normally
growing up. Although, the
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rate
of
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local
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calls
has
been decreased
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between 1999 to 2002
, these
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rates
always are more than the maximum
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rates
in all type of categories.

Moreover
, the mobile
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calls
have two steps, which the
first
step of it has
normally
increased
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between 1995 to 1999
and then has
significantly
up warded (1999-2002).
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as
a result,
however
, the
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of mobile usages
sharply
have progressed,
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but
it couldn't reach to other types of
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IELTS academic The bar Chart illustrates the rate of using telephone in the United Kingdom in during seven years.

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