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Write a short report of poverty families in australia in 1999 and give shoet description about them

Write a short report of poverty families in australia in 1999 and give shoet description about them dOAK
The provided table represents the information about categories of families, who are lived in poverty in Australia in 1999. We can see that, 21% sole parent lived in poverty which is the highest proportion of people among all other proportions whereas only 4% aged couple lived in poverty which is the lowest proportion of people. From the table, we can observe that, more than 1. 83 million Australian families were poor in 1999 and it comprised just over one-tenth of the total Australian households. In single aged person’s family, 54 thousand proportions of people are lived in poverty whereas in single and no children families, 19% people are lived in poverty which is lower than sole parent type and higher than all other family types. 211 thousand couple and no children families are lived under poverty line. The percentage of couple with children families is twelve which is lower than sole parent, no children and single families.
The provided table represents the information about categories of
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families
, who are
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lived
in
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poverty
in Australia in 1999. We can
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see
that, 21% sole parent
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lived
in
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poverty
which is the highest
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proportion
of
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people
among all other proportions whereas
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only
4% aged couple
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lived
in
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poverty
which is the lowest
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proportion
of
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people
.

From the table, we can observe that, more than 1. 83 million Australian
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families
were poor in 1999 and it comprised
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over one-tenth of the total Australian households. In single aged person’s
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family
, 54 thousand proportions of
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people
are
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lived
in
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poverty
whereas in single and no
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children
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families
, 19%
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people
are
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lived
in
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poverty
which is lower than sole parent type and higher than all other
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family
types. 211 thousand
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couple
and no
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children
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families
are
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lived
under
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poverty
line. The percentage of couple with
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children
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families
is twelve which is lower than sole parent, no
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children
and single
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families
.
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IELTS academic Write a short report of poverty families in australia in 1999 and give shoet description about them

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157 words
6.0
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