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The chart below shows the process of waste plastic recycling.

The chart below shows the process of waste plastic recycling. MpXa
The diagram illustrates the manufacturing of plastic regeneration. Overall, the regeneration of plastic involves 6 steps. The main purpose of this phenomenon is how to resave the used waste. Moreover a lot of man power and huge machines are required to complete the manufacturing of new products. Firstly, the waste is collected and separated by a plastic recycling company. Next, these units are collected in trunks and are transported to plastic factory. Usually the plastic is deposited in ware house for storage house. After that, it is send for further process that is inspected and sorted. Once sorting is completed, plastic is inspected prior to waste is chopped into small minatural pieces. In addition, washing need to be done with the help of biodegradable soap and water. As a result ground plastic is formed which is packed in boxes for shipment and shipped to partner facility for final processing. Lastly the plastic is made into new products which are finally resold by open markets.
The diagram illustrates the manufacturing of
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plastic
regeneration.

Overall
, the regeneration of
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plastic
involves 6 steps. The main purpose of this phenomenon is how to
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resave
the
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used
waste.
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Moreover
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a lot of
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man
power and huge machines
are required
to complete the manufacturing of new products.

Firstly
, the waste
is collected
and separated by a
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plastic
recycling
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company
.
Next
, these units
are collected
in trunks and
are transported
to
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plastic
factory.
Usually
the
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plastic
is deposited
in ware
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house
for storage
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house
. After that, it is
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send
for
further
process that
is inspected
and sorted.

Once sorting
is completed
,
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plastic
is inspected
prior to waste
is chopped
into
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small
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minatural
pieces.
In addition
, washing need to
be done
with the
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help
of biodegradable soap and water.
As a result
ground
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plastic
is formed
which
is packed
in boxes for shipment and shipped to partner facility for final processing.
Lastly
the
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plastic
is made
into new products which are
finally
resold by open markets.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the process of waste plastic recycling.

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