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The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. jwg8

The diagram describes the regeneration of aluminum cans. Overall, the process contains 7 steps beginning with collecting cans until ending with reusing cans. Firstly, the cans need to be taken to a special collecting center instead of being throwing from normal refuse. These cans are collected from here and are taken to a factory where they are firstly sorted and cleaned. Next, the cans are shredded and crushed in a special machine. The metal is then heated to a high enough temperature allowing the aluminum to melt. It is rolled out to flat to a thickness between 2. 5mm to 6mm depending upon what it is going to use for. As a result, aluminum is now ready to be recycled for new package, such as drinking containers. Finally, the new cans are delivered to a soft drink factory where they are filled. These cans can be sold to public and then reused. In UK, 74% of cans that are sold are reprocessed.

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cans
 until ending with reusing cans.

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cans
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cans
are collected
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cans
are shredded
 and crushed in a special machine.

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now
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cans
are delivered
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. These You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
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can
be sold
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cans
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