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this bar chart shows what leisure activities children in Australia of the age 5 to 14 years participate in. Australian children mostly watch videos or television during their leisure time, with a percentage of hundred for both boys and girls. On average, over a half of the children spend their leisure time by having bike rides and play games on an electric computer. It is clear that boys are more active than girls in their leisure time. However, when it comes to art and craft, there are more girls than boys, this raises a question how creative are girls in comparison to boys. Finally, the activity that has the least amount of children is skateboarding.
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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