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This diagram illustrates the way how aluminum cans are recycled after having used. Overall, there are seven stages in the recycling process, beginning with garbage collection and ending up with reusing the material again. In each stage various works must be done: First, people should make sure that the used cans are put in the separate boxes. Second these cans are carried by Lorries to a factory. There the collected waste goes through several processes such as cleaning, sorting, and shredding and so on. In the next step, the material heated and melted in a boiler. Once aluminum is rolled out with a thickness of 2. 5-6 mm, its gets ready to make new cans. Before, being filled with a beverage the cans are produced in another factory. Finally, the products are distributed to shops and consumers. In such one cyclic process, 74% of total used aluminum become useable again in UK.

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.

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, there are seven stages in the recycling process, beginning with garbage collection and ending up with reusing the material again.

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must
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make
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used
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cans
are put
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cans
are carried
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gets
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make
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cans
. “Before” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Before
, being filled
 with a beverage the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
are produced
 in another factory. Finally
, the products are distributed
 to shops and consumers.

In such one cyclic process, 74% of total This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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