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Writing 150 words, paragraph.

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This diagram illustrates the way how aluminum cans are recycled after having used. Overall, there are seven stages in the recycling process, beginning with garbage collection and ending up with reusing the material again. In each stage various works must be done: First, people should make sure that the used cans are put in the separate boxes. Second these cans are carried by Lorries to a factory. There the collected waste goes through several processes such as cleaning, sorting, and shredding and so on. In the next step, the material heated and melted in a boiler. Once aluminum is rolled out with a thickness of 2. 5-6 mm, its gets ready to make new cans. Before, being filled with a beverage the cans are produced in another factory. Finally, the products are distributed to shops and consumers. In such one cyclic process, 74% of total used aluminum become useable again in UK.
This diagram illustrates the way how aluminum
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cans
are recycled
after having
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used
.

Overall
, there are seven stages in the recycling process, beginning with garbage collection and ending up with reusing the material again.

In each stage various works
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must
be done
:
First
,
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people
should
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make
sure that the
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used
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cans
are put
in the separate boxes. Second these
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cans
are carried
by Lorries to a factory. There the collected waste goes through several processes such as cleaning, sorting, and shredding and
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so
on. In the
next
step, the material heated and melted in a boiler.
“Once” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Once
aluminum
is rolled
out with a thickness of 2. 5-6 mm, its
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gets
ready to
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make
new
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cans
.
“Before” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Before
,
being filled
with a beverage the
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cans
are produced
in another factory.
Finally
, the products
are distributed
to shops and consumers.

In such one cyclic process, 74% of total
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
aluminum become useable again in UK.

IELTS academic Writing 150 words, paragraph.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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