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Write a report on the fossil fuel consumption by observing the statistical graph from United States and United Kingdom.

Write a report on the fossil fuel consumption by observing the statistical graph from United States and United Kingdom. 30LdX
People are heavily reliant on fossil fuels to execute everyday activities. However, the amount people spent on fuel depends largely on the country they live in and also on the economic class they belong to. It is pretty apparent from the graph that the financially under-privileged living in the United States spend heavily on fuel, that is around 4-6% of their total income. A reasonable cause for this could be the lack of public transits in most parts of the country and also the fact that people there prefer own means of transport. On the contrary, poor people in the UK do not spend so much on fuel as the public transport services are very wide-spread and very cost-effective. On the other hand, rich and the people with middle-income do not seem to spend so much on fuel because they have the capacity to afford things running on renewable sources of energy. At the same time, people belonging to the same economic class in the UK spend heavily on fuel. The only reasonable explanation would be the taxation on objects and laws pertaining to things running on renewable energy.
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People
are
heavily
reliant on fossil
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fuels
to execute everyday activities.
However
, the amount
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people
spent on

fuel depends
largely
on the country they
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live
in and
also
on the economic
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class
they belong to.

It is pretty apparent from the graph that the
financially
under-privileged living in the United States spend

heavily
on
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fuel
,
that is
around 4-6% of their total income. A reasonable cause for this could be the lack of

public transits in most parts of the country and
also
the fact that
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people
there prefer
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own
means of transport.

On the contrary
, poor
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people
in the UK do not spend
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so
much on
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fuel
as the public transport services are
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very


wide-spread and
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very
cost-effective.

On the other hand
, rich and the
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people
with middle-income do not seem to spend
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so
much on
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fuel
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because


they have the capacity to afford things running on renewable sources of energy. At the same time,
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people


belonging to the same economic
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class
in the UK spend
heavily
on
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fuel
. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
reasonable explanation

would be the taxation on objects and laws pertaining to things running on renewable energy.
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IELTS academic Write a report on the fossil fuel consumption by observing the statistical graph from United States and United Kingdom.

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