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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and meat in European country from 1979 to 2004

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and meat in European country from 1979 to 2004 kxgo2
The line graph illustrates the amount of fish and three kinds of meat namely Chicken, Beef and Lamb that people of European country consumed each week over the course of 25 years, starting in the year 1979. Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that the consumption of fish showed a slight fluctuation during the given period; meanwhile, this figure for Beef, Chicken and Lamb changed dramatically from the year 1979 to 2004. Starting with more than 50 grams each individual per week, the fish consumption minimally declined for the next five years until 1984, followed by fifteen years of stability. In 1999, this amount decreased a little and then nearly remained unchanged until 2004. However, the consumption of beef and lamb with very high start points of more than 250 grams and 150 grams each person a week had experienced a wild fluctuation with many years of up and down over 25 years and had the main tendency to diminish up to the year 2004. Unlikely these two kind of foods, the Chicken consumption with a rather lower start point than Lamb tended to soar rapidly and reached its peak of more than 250 grams each person each week in 2003, after which stopped in 2004 with a small decline.
The line graph illustrates the amount of fish and three kinds of meat
namely
Chicken, Beef and
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Lamb
that
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people
of European country consumed each
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week
over the course of 25 years, starting in the
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year
1979.

Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that the
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consumption
of fish
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showed
a slight fluctuation during the
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given
period; meanwhile, this figure for Beef, Chicken and
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Lamb
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changed
dramatically
from the
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year
1979 to 2004.

Starting with more than 50
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grams
each individual per
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week
, the fish
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consumption
minimally
declined for the
next
five years until 1984, followed by fifteen years of stability. In 1999, this amount decreased a
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little
and then
nearly
remained unchanged until 2004.

However
, the
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consumption
of beef and
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lamb
with
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very
high
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start
points of more than 250
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grams
and 150
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grams
each person a
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week
had experienced a wild fluctuation with
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many
years of up and down over 25 years and had the main tendency to diminish up to the
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year
2004. Unlikely these two kind of foods, the Chicken
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consumption
with a
rather
lower
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start
point than
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Lamb
tended to soar
rapidly
and reached its peak of more than 250
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grams
each person each
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week
in 2003, after which
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stopped
in 2004 with a
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small
decline.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the consumption of fish and meat in European country from 1979 to 2004

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