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Therefore, it leads to "Feeling disconnected" which makes freshmen can't get well along to others; "Not used to learning",

Therefore, it leads to "Feeling disconnected" which makes freshmen can't get well along to others; "Not used to learning", kxgqK
In my opinon, There might be Homesickness, Feeling disconnected, Not used to learning, Don't know how to spend efficiently, Can't find suitable motel, Timely management as common challenges faced by a freshman at Van Lang University. As homesickness, This is the first time for most of freshmen in university live far from home, they might feel lonely and afraid of society; Therefore, it leads to "Feeling disconnected" which makes freshmen can't get well along to others; "Not used to learning", They can't get used to learning because of learning in University is different to regular high school; "Don't know how to spend efficiently" could be a big problem for freshmen if they couldn't spend money efficiently, they could face by out of money and having problem in future such as ran out of food, etc. "Can't find siutable motel", most of freshmen want a place that they can study more efficiently but there might be problem with money. At last, Timely management is important which freshmen need to control their time efficiently and healthy for themself, they can set up a time table to fix this problem. How can i get prepared for student life ahead? At first, I will sometimes do video calls to my family. This can be a way to help me won't feel lonely anymore. I will be trying to train my languages skills as well as ability to get well along to other students and friending with them. I have to think cleverly to spend efficiently such as buy a right limit foods i need, trying to find the best way to limit spending. If i can spend efficiently, I won't get too much troubles on future. At last, I will need to be independent to set up things such as time table, my SMART goal and doing housework too. Because as a freshman, I have to be independent, I have to do everything on my own which family can't be there to help. All these will increase my skills for the student life ahead.
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IELTS academic Therefore, it leads to "Feeling disconnected" which makes freshmen can't get well along to others; "Not used to learning",

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