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The bar graph illustrates the line-graph that compares the proportion of the GDP and infant mortality the life expectancy from 1970-1992 in the UAE, whereas the expenditures on health and education. Overall, an Education GDP increased till 1993 at over 14. 00% than that of other expenditure. As an overall trend, in 1990 the GDP of health was lowest at 6. 00%. It is clear that the GDP of education increases in 1990. The GDP of both expenditures is comparatively less. Lastly, in 1993, the GDP of education rises above compared to other years. Moreover, life expectancy and infant mortality are falling to the same rate 70. But both commence from different years and also intersect between 1970 and 1992.
The bar graph illustrates the line-graph that compares the proportion of the GDP and infant mortality the life expectancy from 1970-1992 in the UAE, whereas the expenditures on health and education.

Overall
, an Education GDP increased till 1993 at over 14. 00% than that of other expenditure.

As an
overall
trend, in 1990 the GDP of health was lowest at 6. 00%. It is
clear
that the GDP of education increases in 1990. The GDP of both expenditures is
comparatively
less.
Lastly
, in 1993, the GDP of education rises above compared to other years.

Moreover
, life expectancy and infant mortality are falling to the same rate 70.
But
both commence from
different
years and
also
intersect between 1970 and 1992.
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