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write a report for university lecturer describing the information below.

The bar graph illustrates the line-graph that compares the proportion of the GDP and infant mortality the life expectancy from 1970-1992 in the UAE, whereas the expenditures on health and education. Overall, an Education GDP increased till 1993 at over 14. 00% than that of other expenditure. As an overall trend, in 1990 the GDP of health was lowest at 6. 00%. It is clear that the GDP of education increases in 1990. The GDP of both expenditures is comparatively less. Lastly, in 1993, the GDP of education rises above compared to other years. Moreover, life expectancy and infant mortality are falling to the same rate 70. But both commence from different years and also intersect between 1970 and 1992.

The bar graph illustrates the line-graph that compares the proportion of the GDP and infant mortality the life expectancy from 1970-1992 in the UAE, whereas the expenditures on health and education.

Overall
, an Education GDP increased till 1993 at over 14. 00% than that of other expenditure.

As an overall
 trend, in 1990 the GDP of health was lowest at 6. 00%. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the GDP of education increases in 1990. The GDP of both expenditures is comparatively
 less. Lastly
, in 1993, the GDP of education rises above compared to other years.

Moreover
, life expectancy and infant mortality are falling to the same rate 70. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 both commence from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 years and also
 intersect between 1970 and 1992. 

IELTS academic write a report for university lecturer describing the information below.

Academic

American English

4 paragraphs

120 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

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