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The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

The given maps illustrate the information about the changes of the University Campus from 2010 and the present day. It is lucid that took few changes in place. The university office has replaced by science building. In contrast, the building of student accommodation made at same place and also expanded. The number of student accommodation buildings has been increased in size and number it is clearly seen that restaurant has been demolished and lanand sitting chairs has removed, which was the next to lake. In Campus the area of University office converted into science building. , and teaching blocks has been changed into art building. A previous place of student accommodation converted to the student office. However, the lake area has been in same place in present time.
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of the University Campus from 2010 and the present day. It is lucid that took few
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changes
in
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place
. The university office has replaced by science
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building
.
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, the
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of
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student
accommodation made at same
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place
and
also
expanded. The number of
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student
accommodation
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buildings
has
been increased
in size and number it is
clearly
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seen
that restaurant has
been demolished
and
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lanand
sitting chairs has removed, which was the
next
to lake. In Campus the area of University office converted into science
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building
.
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,
and teaching blocks has been
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changed
into art
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building
. A previous
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place
of
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student
accommodation converted to the
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student
office.
However
, the lake area has been in same
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place
in present time.

IELTS academic The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

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