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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagrams below present the function of a machine that is structured for a wave energy. Additionally, the show the location of the machine. According to the first diagram, the wave enters the machine throughout its chabmers. It is clear that there are two chambers, one of them, the botton chamber, contains water, and the other one, that is located at the top of the machine, is empity. The air flow moves from the bottom of the machine to the top of it. Then the turbine allow the air flow to go outside the machine. In contrary, another air folw from the left side is allowed by the turbine to enter the machine. Furthermore, it is obvious that the machine of the wave energy is located between the large and small waves in order to control the balance of the production. To sum up, that illustration shows us how does that type of the machine work.
The diagrams below present the function of a
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machine
that
is structured
for a
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wave
energy.
Additionally
, the
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show
the location of the machine.

According to the
first
diagram, the
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wave
enters the
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machine
throughout its
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chabmers
. It is
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clear
that there are two chambers, one of them, the
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botton
chamber, contains water, and the other one, that
is located
at the top of the
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machine
, is
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empity
.

The air flow
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moves
from the bottom of the
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machine
to the top of it. Then the turbine
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allow
the air flow to go outside the
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machine
. In contrary, another air
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folw
from the
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left
side is
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allowed
by the turbine to enter the machine.

Furthermore
, it is obvious that the
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machine
of the
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wave
energy
is located
between the large and
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small
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waves
in order to control the balance of the production.

To sum up, that illustration
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shows
us how does that type of the
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machine
work.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
156 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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