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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The above plans illusterate the primary feature that indicate the differences between having a student room for one person or two people. According to what has been mentioned in the plans, it is clear that the fees of the room depends mainly on it type. That indicates that the price might differ based on the room's size adnd what other equipments does it have. For example, the room that fits two students costs 350 $ per week since it has many equipments that facilitate the student's life. First, it has two beds, two study desks, and a shared bathroom. the most significant feature that differentiate this type from the other is that it has a table and chairs where the students can eat their meals on it. Finally, it is obvious that a sink, bookshelf, television, stove and a microwave are available there. On the other hand, ther is another type of the student room that is suitable for only one student since it has only one bed, one study desck, and a bathroom. therfore, it costs only 200 $ per week. Addtionally, some facilities such as a television, microwave, stove, and a sink are provided there. To conclude, we could say that the two types of rooms are almost different in terms of their features. However, they have something in common.
The above plans
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illusterate
the primary feature that indicate the differences between having a
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student
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room
for one person or two
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people
.

According to what has
been mentioned
in the plans, it is
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clear
that the fees of the
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room
depends
mainly
on it
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type
. That indicates that the price might differ based on the room's size
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adnd
what other equipments does it have.
For example
, the
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room
that fits two
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students
costs
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350 $
per week since it has
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many
equipments that facilitate the student's life.

First
, it has two beds, two study desks, and a shared bathroom.
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the
most significant feature that differentiate this
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type
from the other is that it has a table and chairs where the
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students
can eat their meals on it.
Finally
, it is obvious that a sink, bookshelf, television, stove and a microwave are available there.

On the other hand
,
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ther
is another
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type
of the
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student
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room
that is
suitable for
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only
one
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student
since it has
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only
one bed, one study
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desck
, and a bathroom.
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therfore
, it costs
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only
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: “$200”.
200 $
per week.
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Addtionally
,
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some
facilities such as a television, microwave, stove, and a sink
are provided
there.

To conclude
, we could say that the two
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types
of
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rooms
are almost
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different
in terms of their features.
However
, they have something in common.
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IELTS academic The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
222 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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