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The table shows the amount of coal used by different sectors in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The given table illustrate the coal consumption by different sectors in the UK. It can be seemed that there was a significant decline of the total amount of coal used between 1975 and 2000. The power stations sector witnessed a significant rise from 77, 2 tonnes to 84, 0 tonnes of coals used during the period between 1975 and 1985, while other sectors (Domestic, Industry and Services sectors) experienced a big fall in coal usage in the same period. Comparing to other sectors, the power stations sector still accounted about two thirds of the total amount of coal used during the period, while the services sector used the least amount of coal comparing to other sectors. During the period between 1985 and 1990, there was a significant decline in the power stations sector's coal usage, while other sectors witnessed a slight decrease in the coal usage. It was not until 1995 that the decline began to stop and the coal consumption remained stable until the year of 2000.
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sectors
in the UK. It can
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that there was a significant decline of the total amount of coal
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used
between 1975 and 2000. The power stations
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sector
witnessed a significant rise from 77, 2 tonnes to 84, 0 tonnes of coals
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used
during the
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period
between 1975 and 1985, while
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other
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sectors
(Domestic, Industry and Services
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sectors)
experienced a
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big
fall in coal usage in the same
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period
. Comparing to
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other
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sectors
, the power stations
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sector
still
accounted about two thirds of the total amount of coal
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used
during the
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, while the services
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sector
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used
the least amount of coal comparing to
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other
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sectors
. During the
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period
between 1985 and 1990, there was a significant decline in the power stations sector's coal usage, while
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other
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sectors
witnessed a slight decrease in the coal usage. It was not until 1995 that the decline began to
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stop
and the coal consumption remained stable until the year of 2000.
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IELTS academic The table shows the amount of coal used by different sectors in the UK.

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