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Write a report describing the information in the graph below.

The line graph demonstrates a survey on how many people used the underground station in the UK over a course of a day. Overall, it is noticeable that the maximum population who utilized it, was at 7: 00 a. m. , while the minimum belonged to 22: 00 p. m. , and also there was some fluctuations throughout the period. At 6: 00 a. m. , the figure for crowd that used underground transportation was almost 100 people. After two hours later, it surged substantially to about 400 persons, then it decreased, and was well over half at 10: 00 p. m. for the rest of the period, the figure climbed to approximately 290 persons, and then tapered off to an almost identical level at 9: 00 a. m. Between the hours 14: 00 and 16: 00, numbers declined, with the lowest figure being recorded at 4: 00 in the afternoon, and after that it increased dramatically to roughly 380 people, and hence, for the following hours, numbers at 20: 00 and 22: 00 were about 120 and 122 people, respectively.

The line graph demonstrates a survey on how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 the underground station in the UK over a course of a day.

Overall
, it is noticeable that the maximum population who utilized it, was at 7: 00 a. m. Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma.,
,
 while the minimum belonged to 22: 00 p. m. Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma.,
,
 and also
 there was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fluctuations throughout the period.

At 6: 00 a. m. Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma.,
,
 the figure for crowd that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 underground transportation was almost 100 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. After two hours later, it surged substantially
 to about 400 persons, then it decreased, and was well over half at 10: 00 p. m. for the rest of the period, the figure climbed to approximately 290 persons, and then tapered off to an almost identical level at 9: 00 a. m.

Between the hours 14: 00 and 16: 00, numbers declined, with the lowest figure being recorded
 at 4: 00 in the afternoon, and after that it increased dramatically
 to roughly 380 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
, and hence
, for the following hours, numbers at 20: 00 and 22: 00 were about 120 and 122 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
, respectively
. 