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maps illustrates a university campus between 2006 to the present day and how the improvements have been made

following maps illustrates a university campus between 2006 to the present day and how the improvements have been made into that. Overall, we observe that several changes happened till now but the student accommodation and lake area remains the same in the university campus area. firstly, as we start from east to west direction, there was a teaching block which is now replaced by arts building for the university students. In addition to, Lawns and seating area which was in the center of the campus is being removed However, lake is still there. As we see from north to south, university offices have been converted into science building. More accommodation are build for the facilities of students. Moreover, resturent and shops are replaced by student accommodation blocks as well as a walking lane for students is made in university campus. student facilities- shops, offices are rebuilt and redesigned as some improvement is made where student accommodation block once stood.
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university
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campus
between 2006 to the present day and how the improvements have
been made
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, we observe that several
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changes
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student
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and lake area remains the same in the
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university
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campus
area.

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firstly
, as we
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start
from east to west direction, there was a teaching block which is
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now
replaced by arts building for the
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university
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students
.
In addition
to, Lawns and seating area which was in the center of the
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campus
is
being removed
However
, lake is
still
there.

As we
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see
from north to south,
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university
offices have
been converted
into science building. More
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accommodation
are build for the facilities of
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students
.
Moreover
,
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resturent
and shops
are replaced
by
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student
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accommodation
blocks
as well
as a walking lane for
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students
is made
in
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university
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campus
.
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student
facilities- shops, offices are rebuilt and redesigned as
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some
improvement
is made
where
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student
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block once stood.

IELTS academic maps illustrates a university campus between 2006 to the present day and how the improvements have been made

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3 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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