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Following maps below shows JBK which is a small town, lies in the centre in the year 2004 to 2020.

Following maps below shows JBK which is a small town, lies in the centre in the year 2004 to 2020. Overall we observe that town has been developed and some of the changes happened in 2020 as compared to year 2004. Firstly, in 2004 as we can see park was located in the centre of the town and when we see to east to west there was hospital and accommodation for the people of the JBK town. Although all the offices were on the right side and school for the children of the town was on the slightly left from the park. Looking at the map of JBK as it is now 2020, we can easily see that some changes takes place as more accommodation was constructed to the east of the park furthermore school was built where hospital once stood but no change in the location of the park. The offices are still on the right side. In addition, mall facilities are added for the people of the town.
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, lies in the
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in the year 2004 to 2020.
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has
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park
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and when we
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. Although all the offices were on the right side and school for the children of the
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in the location of the park. The offices are
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IELTS academic Following maps below shows JBK which is a small town, lies in the centre in the year 2004 to 2020.

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3 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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