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The given graphs show the quantities of customers and the sales in Canadian dollars by years, from 2010 to 2022. Generally, both of these two figures had an increasing tendency between 2010 and 2020, and predict will reach a higher point than where they start. In the first ten years, the numbers of customers and sales were both keep growing until 2014, the number of customers reached the point of more than 600000, and the sales reach the point of nearly 2000000 Canadian dollars. After that, the sales had a slight decrease for one year, the number of customs stayed in the same stander for three years. Then, the sales kept raising and hit the peak of 3500000 Canadian dollars in 2020, but the number of customers just increased till 2019 at its highest point (more than 800000) and fell in the last year. In the next two years, the number of customers is predicted to rise in 2021 then gently decrease in 2022, ending at more than 800000. But the sales will have a decline from 2020 to 2022, predict to end at nearly 3000000 Canadian dollars.
The
given
graphs
show
the quantities of
customers
and the
sales
in Canadian
dollars
by years, from 2010 to 2022.

Generally
, both of these two figures had an increasing tendency between 2010 and 2020, and predict will reach a higher
point
than where they
start
.

In the
first
ten years, the
numbers
of
customers
and
sales
were both
keep
growing until 2014, the
number
of
customers
reached the
point
of more than 600000, and the
sales
reach the
point
of
nearly
2000000 Canadian
dollars
. After that, the
sales
had a slight decrease for one
year
, the
number
of customs stayed in the same stander for three years. Then, the
sales
kept
raising and hit the peak of 3500000 Canadian
dollars
in 2020,
but
the
number
of
customers
just
increased till 2019 at its highest
point
(more than 800000) and fell in the last year.

In the
next
two years, the
number
of
customers
is predicted
to rise in 2021 then
gently
decrease in 2022, ending at more than 800000.
But
the
sales
will have a decline from 2020 to 2022, predict to
end
at
nearly
3000000 Canadian
dollars
.
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IELTS academic Write a formal report based on the data below

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4 paragraphs
188 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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