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TEH DIAGRAM BELOW SHOW THE PRODUCTION AND PROCESSING OF MILK AND DAIRY PRODUCTS FOR COMMERCIAL SALES

TEH DIAGRAM BELOW SHOW THE PRODUCTION AND PROCESSING OF MILK AND DAIRY PRODUCTS FOR COMMERCIAL SALES pKMQ3

THE PROCESS CHART ILLUSTRATES THE PROCESSING OF MILK AND MANUFACTURING OF DAIRY GOODS FOR COMMERCIALIZED USAGE. OVERALL, THE PROCESS IS DIVIDED INTO THREE MAIN STEPS (COLLECTION OF MILK, PASTUERIZATION AND PACKAGING) AND CONSIST OF EIGHT SUB-STEPS. IT ACN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE COWS IS FEEDING GRASS IN THE LAWN AND THEY ARE READY FOR MILKING PROCESS WHERE, THE MILK IS PROCURES TWO TIMES A DAY WITH THE HELP OF MACHINES. AFTER MILKING, THE MILK IS STORED UNDER ENORMOUS REFRIGERATORS AND LATTER, IT IS TRANSPORTED TO FACTORIES. THE PROCESS CHART FURTEHR COLLATE THAT, IN THE FACTORIES, THE MILK IS BOILED AND PASTUERIZED AT CERTAIN TEMPERATURE TO INCREASES SHELF LIFE. FINALLY, THE MILK IS PACKED UNDER TETRA PACKS AND ITEMS (BUTTER, CHEESE AND CREAM) DELIVERED TO SUPERMARKETS AND SHOPS FOR SALES.

THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
PROCESS
 CHART ILLUSTRATES THE PROCESSING OF You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
MILK
 AND MANUFACTURING OF DAIRY This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
GOODS
 FOR COMMERCIALIZED USAGE.

OVERALL
, THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
PROCESS
IS DIVIDED
 INTO THREE MAIN STEPS (COLLECTION OF You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
MILK
, Possible spelling mistake found.PasteurizationPosterization
PASTUERIZATION
 AND PACKAGING) AND CONSIST OF EIGHT SUB-STEPS.

IT ACN BE CLEARLY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
SEEN
 THAT, THE COWS IS FEEDING GRASS IN THE LAWN AND THEY ARE READY FOR MILKING You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
PROCESS
 WHERE, THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
MILK
 IS PROCURES TWO TIMES A DAY WITH THE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
HELP
 OF MACHINES. AFTER MILKING, THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
MILK
IS STORED
 UNDER ENORMOUS REFRIGERATORS AND LATTER, IT IS TRANSPORTED
 TO FACTORIES.

THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
PROCESS
 CHART Possible spelling mistake found.FurtherCurterFürth
FURTEHR
 COLLATE THAT, IN THE FACTORIES, THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
MILK
IS BOILED
 AND Possible spelling mistake found.PasteurizedPosterizedPosturizedRasterized
PASTUERIZED
 AT CERTAIN TEMPERATURE TO INCREASES SHELF LIFE. FINALLY
, THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
MILK
IS PACKED
 UNDER TETRA PACKS AND ITEMS (BUTTER, CHEESE AND CREAM) DELIVERED TO SUPERMARKETS AND SHOPS FOR SALES. 