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The line diagram illustrates the percentage of youngsters using drugs in a city between 2002 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line diagram illustrates the percentage of youngsters using drugs in a city between 2002 and 2014. Kl5A0
The graph compares the percentage of youngsters using drugs in a city between the years 2002 and 2014. It can be seen that the percentage of youngsters using drugs in the age group between 18 to 25 is quite higher level than other age groups. In 2002, 20% of the youngsters taking drugs of age group between 18 to 25. It is 4 times more than another age group of above 25 and it is slightly decreased in between the years 2003 and 2004. The curve remains stable until 2008. From 2008 to 2009 the percentage of drug users has been increased by 2. 5%. It remains constant until 2012 and then it is raised slightly by 2014. In contrast, The percentage of drug users of the age group above 25 is 6 % in 2002 and the line remains steady until 2004. It increased a little by 1% in 2010, By 2014 this raised again but more steeply to 2 %. On one hand, The percentage of drug users in the age group between 12 to 17 is a bit more than the age group below 12. In 2002, 13% of the youth is taking drugs and this figure is declined to 10% by 2005 and remains constant until 2007. The usage of drugs is almost the same of the two age groups in 2010, By the end of 2014, this rate is decreased to 3 %. On the other hand, The percentage of drug users of the age group below 12 is fairly constant from 2002 to 2007 and the rate was little increased by 2% in 2012. By the end of 2014, it is slightly higher and almost the same in both the age groups. In conclusion, We can see that the percentage of drug users in the city in the age group between 18 to 25 is higher level throughout the whole period compared to other age groups.
The graph compares the
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age
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between 18 to 25
is quite higher level than other
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age
groups.

In 2002, 20% of the youngsters taking
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drugs
of
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age
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group
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between 18 to 25
. It is 4 times more than another
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age
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group
of above 25 and it is
slightly
decreased in between the years 2003 and 2004. The curve
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remains
stable until 2008. From 2008 to 2009 the
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percentage
of
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drug
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users
has
been increased
by 2. 5%. It
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remains
constant until 2012 and then it
is raised
slightly
by 2014.
In contrast
, The
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of
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drug
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age
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above 25 is 6 % in 2002 and the line
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remains
steady until 2004. It increased a
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by 1% in 2010, By 2014 this raised again
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but
more
steeply
to 2 %.

On one hand, The
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of
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drug
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users
in the
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age
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Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 12 and 17".
between 12 to 17
is a bit more than the
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age
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group
below 12. In 2002, 13% of the youth is taking
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drugs
and this figure
is declined
to 10% by 2005 and
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remains
constant until 2007. The usage of
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drugs
is almost the same of the two
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age
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groups
in 2010, By the
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end
of 2014, this rate
is decreased
to 3 %.
On the other hand
, The
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of the
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age
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below 12 is
fairly
constant from 2002 to 2007 and the rate was
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increased by 2% in 2012. By the
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end
of 2014, it is
slightly
higher and almost the same in both the
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age
groups.

In conclusion
, We can
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that the
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in the city in the
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age
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Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 18 and 25".
between 18 to 25
is higher level throughout the whole period compared to other
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age
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groups
.
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IELTS academic The line diagram illustrates the percentage of youngsters using drugs in a city between 2002 and 2014.

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