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The pictures illustrated us information about the factory process of frozen meat pies.

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The pictures illustrated us information about the factory process of frozen meat pies. There is an ingredients of meat pie that put in the microwaveable plastic container. The ingredients consist of meat layer as the basic layer, in the middle layer after first layer covered by gravy sauce, pea and carrot layer. Following this, potato layer as the last layer covered all of this ingredients. This is it the final of a finished meat pie. However, there are several stages to mass production of a finished meat pie. First of all the stages, all of raw materials like a potatoes, defrosted beef, and so on distributed by agent from another area to the main factory of meat pies production. After this, each of raw ingredients is in the processed by machine and human, especially for processing of potatoes and defrosted beef that is in the seperated process machine with the different processed. After all, next processed is to gathered all of ingredients to be a finished meat pie and wrapped all of the meat pie. Finally, the pack of wrap meals are stored to another shop or area that needed frozen meat pie.

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