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THE GRAPH BELOW SHOWTHE WEEKLY VOLUME OF PASSENGER ACTIVITY ON THE TORONTO METRO SYSTEM FOR JULY 2007.

THE GRAPH BELOW SHOWTHE WEEKLY VOLUME OF PASSENGER ACTIVITY ON THE TORONTO METRO SYSTEM FOR JULY 2007. Wn6Lb
TEH LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE NUMBER OF TARVELLERS ACITIVITIES IN TORONTO METRO STATION IN THE MONTH OF JULY IN 2007. THE UNITS ARE MEASURED IN THOUSANDS. OVERALL, THE LARGEST FOOTFALL ON METRO STATION FALLS ON PEAK HOURS OF 8: 00 AM AND 6: 00 PM WHEREAS, THE LOWEST DIGIT F PASSENGER ACTIVITY RECORD AT 6: 00 AM AND 4: 00 PM. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, IN THE BEGINNING TIME THE FOOTFALL IS EXACTLY 100, 000 AND THE NUMBERS OF PEOPLE SKYROCKET TO 400, 000 AT 8: 00. THEN, IT FACED A DRASTIC DECLINE IN COMING TWO HOURS. AFTERTHAT, IT INCREASES BY 100, 000 AT 12: 00 AND REMAINED CONSTANT COUPLE OF HOURS. THE LINE GRAPH FURTHER COLLATE THAT, NEAR 4: 00 THE NUMERIC OF CITIZENS TRAVELLING THROUGH TORONTO METRO PLUMMET TO 100, 000 THEN, IT HIKED TO AROUND 400, 000 PEOPLE AT 6: 00. FINALLY, IT DROPS TO APPROXIMATELY 125, 000 AT 10; 00.
TEH
LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE NUMBER OF
TARVELLERS
ACITIVITIES
IN TORONTO METRO STATION IN THE MONTH OF JULY IN 2007. THE UNITS
ARE MEASURED
IN THOUSANDS.

OVERALL
, THE LARGEST FOOTFALL ON METRO STATION FALLS ON PEAK HOURS OF 8: 00 AM AND 6: 00 PM WHEREAS, THE LOWEST DIGIT F PASSENGER ACTIVITY RECORD AT 6: 00 AM AND 4: 00 PM.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
SEEN
THAT, IN THE BEGINNING TIME THE FOOTFALL IS EXACTLY 100, 000 AND THE NUMBERS OF
PEOPLE
SKYROCKET TO 400, 000 AT 8: 00. THEN, IT FACED A DRASTIC DECLINE IN COMING TWO HOURS.
AFTERTHAT
, IT INCREASES BY 100, 000 AT 12: 00 AND REMAINED CONSTANT COUPLE OF HOURS.

THE LINE GRAPH
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, NEAR 4: 00 THE NUMERIC OF CITIZENS TRAVELLING THROUGH TORONTO METRO PLUMMET TO 100, 000 THEN, IT HIKED TO AROUND 400, 000
PEOPLE
AT 6: 00.
FINALLY
, IT DROPS TO APPROXIMATELY 125, 000 AT 10; 00.
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