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THE TABLE BELOW SHOW THE WORLDWIDE MARKET SHARE OF THE MOBILE PHONE FOR MANUFACTURES IN THE YEAR 2005 AND 2006.

THE TABLE BELOW SHOW THE WORLDWIDE MARKET SHARE OF THE MOBILE PHONE FOR MANUFACTURES IN THE YEAR 2005 AND 2006. pKMW3

THE TABULAR CHART ILLUSTRATES THE GLOBAL MARKET SHARES OF VARIOUS SMARTPHONE MANUFACTURING COMPANIES IN TWO CONSECUTIVE YEARS 2005 AND 2006. OVERALL, THE NOKIA IS THE LEADING MARKET SHARE ORGANIZATION WHEREAS, BENQ IS THE LOWEST PERFORMED FIRM. COUPLES OF ORGANISATION INCREASED MARKET SHARE WHILE, OTHER DECLINES. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, NOKIA IS ACCOUNTED AS THES HIGHEST SELLING MOBILE PHONE COMPANY IN BOTH YEAR AND IT INCREASES FROM 32. 5% TO 35%. SIMILARLY, MOTOROLA SHOW A SIMILAR TREND OF AROUND 2. 5% INCREMENT. SAMSUNG AND SONY ERICSON SALES INCREASES BY 1. 1% AND 0. 9% RESPECTIVELY. THE TABLE CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, IN 2005 THE MARKET SHARE OF LG IS 6. 7% WHICH, DROPS TO 6. 4% IN FINAL PERIOD. MEANWHILE, BENQ IS STATED FOR AROUND ONE TWENTY AND FALLS TO 2. 5% IN 2006. FINALLY, THE OTHER BRANDS IS NEAR ONE FOURTH IN FIRST SPAN AND IT SLIPS TO 16. 2%.

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 COLLATE THAT, IN 2005 THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvertiseretaildisplay
MARKET
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SHARE
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