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Write 150 words.underground rail networks in 6 cities

Write 150 words. underground rail networks in 6 cities VY5GQ
The table provided gives information on the underground railway systems in different six major cities. The table compares the six chief towns in term of their age, size and the figure for people who use them per year. It is clear that the three oldest under ground systems are larger and serve significantly more passengers than the newer systems. . As per the table, the london underground railway dates back to 1863, making it the oldest subway system in the table followed by the Paris underground, which opened in 1900. In contrast, Los Angeles has the youngest underground railway of 6 cities, dating back to only 2001. However, while London and Paris also have the longest subway systems, with 394 and 199 km | respectively, Los Angeles is only the second Shortest at 28 km. The shortest underground railway belongs to kyoto (11 km) Regarding the numbers of passangers served, Tokyo's is by far the busiest subway with 1922 millions passengers per yearl, despite having less than half the length of railway compared to London underground railway, which transport only 775 million people per year of b
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six major cities. The table compares the six chief towns in term of their age, size and the figure for
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people
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them per year. It is
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that the three oldest under ground
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london
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dates back to 1863, making it the oldest subway
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in the table

followed by the Paris
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, which opened in 1900.
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, Los Angeles has the youngest
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underground


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railway
of 6 cities, dating back to
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2001.
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, with 394 and 199 km |
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, Los Angeles is
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the second Shortest at 28 km. The shortest
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belongs to
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kyoto
(11 km) Regarding the numbers of
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passangers
served, Tokyo's is by far the busiest subway with 1922 millions passengers per
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, despite having less than half the length of
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compared to London
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, which transport
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775 million
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per year of
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IELTS academic Write 150 words. underground rail networks in 6 cities

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186 words
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