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Horry movie I have watched last night

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Although 80% of the people living on the earth don't really like horror movies, they do watch sometimes. Admittedly, I'm one of the top men who really afraid to timepiece but do so. To be make sure, I found a movie poster on Channel Myanmar which is a website from which we can download every show we saw on it. Definitely, that was a horrible one. I watched the trailer and I thought it was not that scary, and I was wrong. I watched it in the day time as I was utterly terrifying. How would you do that at night if you were me? After passing over 25 minutes, I thought I never should have tasteit ever. I can't even fully describe how terribly that was. Every scene is so dangerous for me to take my covering hands above my eyes off. My fully bright room couldn't even save me. Suddenly, I heard a sound from credit scene although I haven't watched a single plot yet. Thus, I decided to re-watch it again. Now, curiosity could overcome my tentative mind. Therefore, I brought my supper to the table, so I could turn my eyes to it by the time the ghost appeared. The film was about the revenge of a girl with extremely grieved outrages. To be exact about it, she was rapped and murdered by a group of four desperate young men. So, she came back to kill them all. After reaching to the place where they did to the girl again, they were murdered one after another, unfortunately. Inescapably, they all died and they deserve it. Although I watched it till the end, I was and am still afraid to try horror show. I would like to taste some show like that if I have a chance in coming future.
Although 80% of the
people
living on the earth don't
really
like horror movies, they do
watch
sometimes
.
Admittedly
, I'm one of the top
men
who
really
afraid to timepiece
but
do
so
. To be
make
sure, I found a movie poster on Channel Myanmar which is a website from which we can download every
show
we
saw
on it. Definitely, that was a horrible one. I
watched
the trailer and I
thought
it was not that scary, and I was
wrong
. I
watched
it in the day time as I was
utterly
terrifying. How would you do that at night if you were me?

After passing over 25 minutes, I
thought
I never should have
tasteit
ever. I can't even
fully
describe
how
terribly
that was. Every scene is
so
dangerous
for me to take my covering hands above my eyes off. My
fully
bright room couldn't even save me.
Suddenly
, I heard a sound from credit scene although I haven't
watched
a single plot
yet
.
Thus
, I decided to re-
watch
it again.
Now
, curiosity could overcome my tentative mind.
Therefore
, I brought my supper to the table,
so
I could turn my eyes to it by the time the ghost appeared. The film was about the revenge of a girl with
extremely
grieved outrages. To be exact about it, she
was rapped
and murdered by a group of four desperate young
men
.
So
, she came back to kill them all. After reaching to the place where they did to the girl again, they
were murdered
one after another, unfortunately.
Inescapably
, they all
died
and they deserve it. Although I
watched
it till the
end
, I was and am
still
afraid to try horror
show
. I would like to taste
some
show
like that if I have a chance in coming future.
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