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Write an essay about how people in your family share housework. Refer to the sample essay on page 12 in your textbook. You must write at least 150 words.

Write an essay about how people in your family share housework. Refer to the sample essay on page 12 in your textbook. You must p1nxd
My family has three members: my dad, my mum, and me. Every day we have our own work. While both my parents work, I spend most of my time at school. Consequently we split the house work equally and we should do the chores that are suitable for our physical health or perhaps to our own interests. Because my father is the healthiest person in the family, he is responsible for doing heavy lifting. He usually mends things around the house and mowes the lawn. Sometime he cleans the fridge and help me do the washing-up when I'm extremely busy. My mother fond of eating, so she like to be responsible for cooking. In additional, she always shop for groceries in order to prepare ingredient for meals. As a small girl, I prefer doing light chores such as doing the washing-up to heavy ones like mowing the lawn. I always sweep the house, lay the table and water the household plants. Furthermore I like feeding our cat because I love our cat and seeing him eating cheerfully makes me happy. Because we share the housework properly so everyone doesn't feel stress and have plenty of time for own leisure
My family has three members: my dad, my mum, and me. Every day we have our
own
work. While both my parents work, I spend most of my time at school.
Consequently
we split the
house
work
equally and
we should do the chores that are suitable for our physical health or perhaps to our
own
interests.

Because
my father is the healthiest person in the family, he is responsible for doing heavy lifting. He
usually
mends things around the
house
and
mowes
the lawn. Sometime he cleans the fridge and
help
me do the washing-up when I'm
extremely
busy.

My mother fond of eating,
so
she like to be responsible for cooking. In additional, she always
shop
for groceries in order to prepare ingredient for meals.

As a
small
girl, I prefer doing light chores such as doing the washing-up to heavy ones like mowing the lawn. I always sweep the
house
, lay the table and water the household plants.
Furthermore
I like feeding our cat
because
I
love
our cat and seeing him eating
cheerfully
makes
me happy.

Because
we share the housework
properly
so
everyone doesn't feel
stress
and have
plenty
of time for
own
leisure
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IELTS academic Write an essay about how people in your family share housework. Refer to the sample essay on page 12 in your textbook. You must

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