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the diagram shows the olive oil prodcution

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The given process depicts the stages in the production of olive oil. It is clear from the picture that there are seven main stages from the picking to the final sale. To start with, olives are picked from the olive tress. After that, fresh olives are washed in cold water and rinsed several times until they are clean enough. Then olives are put on a belt before being put in a smashing device in which they are smashed and separated into olive stones and olive paste. In the fourth stage, the olive paste is put in the bag with holes and the whole thing is put into pressing apparatus where it is pressed to get the maximum possible liquid.

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given
 process depicts the stages in the production of olive oil. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the picture that there are seven main stages from the picking to the final sale. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
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olives
are picked
 from the olive tress. After that, fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
are washed
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cold
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enough
. Then You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
 are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinsertsetinvestfocusbringsettle
put
 on a belt This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 being You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinsertsetinvestfocusbringsettle
put
 in a smashing device in which they are smashed
 and separated into olive stones and olive paste. In the fourth stage, the olive paste is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinsertsetinvestfocusbringsettle
put
 in the bag with holes and the whole thing is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinsertsetinvestfocusbringsettle
put
 into pressing apparatus where it is pressed
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the maximum possible liquid. 