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the diagram shows the olive oil prodcution

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The given process depicts the stages in the production of olive oil. It is clear from the picture that there are seven main stages from the picking to the final sale. To start with, olives are picked from the olive tress. After that, fresh olives are washed in cold water and rinsed several times until they are clean enough. Then olives are put on a belt before being put in a smashing device in which they are smashed and separated into olive stones and olive paste. In the fourth stage, the olive paste is put in the bag with holes and the whole thing is put into pressing apparatus where it is pressed to get the maximum possible liquid.
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process depicts the stages in the production of olive oil. It is
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clear
from the picture that there are seven main stages from the picking to the final sale. To
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start
with,
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olives
are picked
from the olive tress. After that, fresh
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olives
are washed
in
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cold
water and rinsed several times until they are clean
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enough
. Then
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olives
are
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put
on a belt
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before
being
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put
in a smashing device in which they
are smashed
and separated into olive stones and olive paste. In the fourth stage, the olive paste is
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put
in the bag with holes and the whole thing is
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put
into pressing apparatus where it
is pressed
to
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get
the maximum possible liquid.
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IELTS academic the diagram shows the olive oil prodcution

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