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The map portrays the map of the present ground floor of a house and the renovation plan proposed to change it.

The map portrays the map of the present ground floor of a house and the renovation plan proposed to change it. ebQ9G
The map portrays the map of the present ground floor of a house and the renovation plan proposed to change it. Overall, by having a meticulous review it can be deduced that the plan for main changes concern the doors and the hallway. At fits glance, it can be noted that the staircase is proposed to become wider with a spiral shape at the expense of the wall at the left of it along with the two doors that will be dismantled and the storage room below will be demolished. The other change will include the installment o the double doors near the main entrance of the house. On the other hand, the front door and the back entrance will be intact along with the living room. The area of the living room will increase dramatically due to the removed wall. Lastly, it is intended to purchase new furniture do the kitchen thus making it convenient.
The map portrays the map of the present
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ground floor
of a
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house
and the renovation plan proposed to
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change
it.
Overall
, by having a meticulous review it can
be deduced
that the plan for main
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
concern the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
doors
and the hallway.

At fits glance, it can
be noted
that the staircase
is proposed
to become wider with a spiral shape at the expense of the wall at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
of it along with the two
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
doors
that will
be dismantled
and the storage room below will
be demolished
. The other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
will include the installment o the double
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
doors
near the main entrance of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

On the other hand
, the front
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
door
and the back entrance will be intact along with the living room. The area of the living room will increase
dramatically
due to the removed wall.
Lastly
, it
is intended
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
new furniture do the kitchen
thus
making it convenient.
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IELTS academic The map portrays the map of the present ground floor of a house and the renovation plan proposed to change it.

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