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Write 150 words. Map shows four period development of chorlywood

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The map depicts the growth of a village called Chorleywood over a 26-year-period, starting from 1868. Overall, it is evident that the transport system of Chorleywood has seen a lot of improvements in four time periods. The village started to grow near one of the main roads from 1868 to 1883. Then, the sparsely populated small village started to expend along south between 1883 to 1922. After that, from 1922 to 1970 the village expended towards east and west. In the year 1970, a motorway was built which intersects one of the main roads and a railway. People started living near the motorway and In 1909, a railway was built from the west to east which developed the transport system once again. Chorleywood Park and the Golf course were near the Chorleywood station and almost in the middle of the main roads, motorway & railway.
The map depicts the growth of a
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Chorleywood
over a 26-year-period, starting from 1868.

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, it is evident that the transport system of
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Chorleywood
has
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a lot of
improvements in four time periods.

The
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village
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started
to grow near one of the main roads from 1868 to 1883. Then, the
sparsely
populated
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small
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village
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started
to expend along south
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between 1883 to 1922
. After that, from 1922 to 1970 the
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village
expended towards east and west.

In the year 1970, a motorway
was built
which intersects one of the main roads and a railway.

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People
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started
living near the motorway and In 1909, a railway
was built
from the west to east which developed the transport system once again.
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Chorleywood
Park and the Golf course were near the
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Chorleywood
station and almost in the middle of the main roads, motorway & railway.

IELTS academic Write 150 words. Map shows four period development of chorlywood

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