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Chart about the export value of the country

Chart about the export value of the country 9l8XX
The chart illustrates that export value of one country in various categories in 2015 and 2016 and the table shows the proportion of change in each category of export in 2016 compared to 2015. Firstly, the earnings from petroleum products stood at 61 billion dollars in 2015 and it was increased by 3% in 2016. Secondly, the engineered goods earned up to 57 billion dollars in 2015 through export and it had further increased to 62 billions in 2016 which was a proportion of 8. 5%. Next, the revenue of gems and jewelry from export stood at 44 billions dollars in 2015 and it had decreased by 5. 8% in 2016 compared to the previous year. Furthermore, the agricultural products earned around 32 billions in 2015 and it had increased slightly by 0. 81% in 2016. Finally, the low earning category in the chart is textiles which earned only 24 billions in 2015 whereas it was rocketed in 2016 by 15. 24%(32 billions). In fact, the highest percentage of change in values among all in 2016. All in all, the country's revenue from export was marginally increased in 2016 compared with 2015 in all the categories, except gems and jewelry which dipped by 5. 18% in former.
The chart illustrates that
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value of one country in various categories in 2015 and 2016 and the table
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the

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proportion
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change
in each category of
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in 2016 compared to 2015.

Firstly
, the earnings from petroleum products stood at 61
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billion
dollars in 2015 and it was
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increased
by 3% in 2016.

Secondly
, the engineered
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goods
earned up to 57
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billion
dollars in 2015 through
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export
and it had
further
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increased
to 62 billions

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in
2016 which was a proportion of 8. 5%.
Next
, the revenue of gems and jewelry from
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stood at 44 billions

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dollars
in 2015 and it had decreased by 5. 8% in 2016 compared to the previous year.

Furthermore
, the agricultural products earned around 32
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billions
in 2015 and it had
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increased
slightly
by 0. 81% in 2016.

Finally
, the low earning category in the chart is textiles which earned
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only
24
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billions
in 2015 whereas it
was rocketed
in

2016 by 15. 24%(32
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billions)
. In fact, the highest percentage of
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change
in values among all in 2016.

All in all, the country's revenue from
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was
marginally
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increased
in 2016 compared with 2015 in all the categories,

except gems and jewelry which dipped by 5. 18% in former.

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