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Map shows the number of Afghan refugees received by neighbouring countries during the US led attacks on afghanistan in october/November 2001.

Map shows the number of Afghan refugees received by neighbouring countries during the US led attacks on afghanistan in october/November 2001. m9KQ1
The map depicts the count of Afghan refugees received by neighbouring nations during the us led attacks on afghanistan in October/ november 2001. There are three refugees camps. It can be clearly seen, 2, 000, 000 refugees are received by Pakistan which is situated south direction of afghanistan. Moreover, there are three refugees campus named jazlozi in the east direction of afghanistan and Killi Faizo, Roghani stiuted in South direction of afghanistan. Moving further, 1. 5 million refugees received by iran in the direction of west around afghanistan. Moreover, Turkistan, uzbekistan and tajikistan were received these places were received refugees by 1500, 8, 800 and 15, 00 respectively. lastly, 3, 525, 700 refugees received by around the nation's of afghanistan. Overall, Pakistan received the maximum count of Afghan refugees, whereas nations turkmenistan, uzbekistan and tajikistan had received minimum count of afghan refugees.
The map depicts the count of Afghan
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received
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neighbouring
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the us
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afghanistan
in October/
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november
2001. There are three
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camps. It can be
clearly
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seen
, 2, 000, 000
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refugees
are
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by Pakistan which
is situated
south
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direction
of
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afghanistan
.
Moreover
, there are three
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refugees
campus named
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jazlozi
in the east
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afghanistan
and
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Killi
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Faizo
,
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Roghani
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stiuted
in South
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direction
of
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afghanistan
. Moving
further
, 1. 5 million
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received
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iran
in the
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direction
of west around
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afghanistan
.
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,
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Turkistan
,
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uzbekistan
and
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tajikistan
were
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received
these places were
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received
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by 1500, 8, 800 and 15, 00
respectively
.
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lastly
, 3, 525, 700
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received
by around the nation's of
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afghanistan
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, Pakistan
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received
the maximum count of Afghan
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, whereas nations
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turkmenistan
,
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uzbekistan
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tajikistan
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