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The bar chart below show the information about male and female in different reason post school qualification in Australia in 1999

The bar chart below show the information about male and female in different reason post school qualification in Australia in 1999 p1Bra

The bar chart illustrate the information about difference between males and females in different post school qualification in Australia in 1999 the data has been provided in percentageLooking and overall women had highest proportion into qualifications in the same time man draw up first in three the highest amount for women and men was reported in undergraduate diploma and skilled vocational diploma respectivelyAfter analysing it can be seen clearly that there was a significant difference between the present Isle of man and woman in skilled vocational diploma with the former standing with 90% the percentage between two figures was almost same in undergraduate diploma and postgraduate yet while in the former woman had the torrent share with 70% man accounted for the largest percentile in the letter with 70%Women also ranked first in bachelor's degree where as the share of men was lower by a narrow margin 55 and 45% respectively in contrast in in master degree the contributed of females was 23 as high as that of males as the letter was responsible for the largest share with 60%

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 master degree the contributed of females was 23 as high as that of males as the letter was responsible for the largest share with 60%